From my point of view, mobile technologies
blur the boundary of private and public space to a great extent. Let’s use
Global Positioning System (GPS) as an example to demonstrate my arguments.
Every smartphone has GPS installed nowadays and it is extremely useful for us
in searching and finding unfamiliar or unclear destination, such as buildings
and streets.
However, your friends may have a chance to
detect your location through social media platform (Facebook) by using its
particular function. It sounds awful but your private space is no longer secure
unless you change your privacy settings and your whereabouts becomes a public
space while you may not realize at all.
To a great extent, the blurring of the
boundary is favorable to our daily life. Using an incident of whether the teenagers
should offer their seats to the elderly as an example, it actually could
practice our critical thinking towards the behavior of the teenagers, the
standard and atmosphere of our society nowadays whether we should give our
seats to everyone in need in the MTR although we are very tired after work or
we are actually ill but the other passengers have not noticed that at all.
Thus, once we set our post into public or
the others share throughout the Facebook, it no longer becomes our private
space and it may brings out different discussion of the performance and characteristic
of someone by taking photos using our smartphones and upload it to social media
platforms.
Student Name: Chu Chi Wai
Dear Chi Wai, for the first point, you may want to discuss surveillance and self-discipline if you are going to make use of this argument in your future writing. They could help formulate your arguments in a more theoretical way. The second argument about the blurring of boundaries, discussion is proper. The social significance and impact brought about by technology can be emphasised.
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