In the eyes of many people, media is an
indispensable medium for different purpose. I use media in my daily life. I can
easily keep up with the latest news and communicate with my friends or family.
Some internet platforms like Facebook and Instagram allows me to share some
interesting things or life experience with friends or other social media users.

Expose my private life and emotion to my
friends, letting them know more about my happiness and hatred. I enjoy showing
my real side in this back space. Although I think Instagram and Facebook both
give a perfect space to present myself and improve interpersonal relationship,
many critics believe social media is a two edged sword. I also think if one day
everyone becomes active on social media, do people still meet their friends
irregularly? It may eventually create a distance from people. (284 words)
Student Name: Lai Hoi Ying Ada
Dear Ada, the writing demonstrates strong personal but reasonable opinions. You also make reference to the concepts learnt in class. Nice. In the upcoming first portfolio component, you can extend the discussion here and strengthen the theoretical review of the idea of presentation of self. Neutrality of technology is worth mentioning as you also come to this conclusion at the end of your writing. Keep up the good work! (Frankie)
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